Tuesday, February 23, 2010

The Cleansing

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4 comments:

  1. A Girl Can Always DreamFebruary 24, 2010 at 10:53 AM

    I like the addition of figures but I think the bright spot towards the center is a bit overwhelming. Also, where is your focal point - there is lot going on. Think more about emphasis vs. de-emphasis.

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  2. LauraFebruary 24, 2010 at 11:46 AM

    I agree, the bright center spot is a bit blinding.Otherwise, I think you've made some good progress.

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  3. BrandonFebruary 24, 2010 at 12:34 PM

    I like that you changed your individual(s) to a lavender color. It is definitely more fitting of the scene.

    You can probably mask out some of the flares or even desaturate them to decrease their intensity.

    The only other technical issue that bothers me, personally, is the red star badges on "the man" are layered over top of your light source.

    Otherwise it looks great so far.

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  4. LindseyFebruary 28, 2010 at 10:10 AM

    I like that you added the black people into this one. I also like that you changed the color of the guy to purple I think it works much better :)

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